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Knowledge hope and feelings by ~libertine-rebel:iconlibertine-rebel:



I wrote this ages ago..probably in some way proving to myself I wasn't being blind but I was
but oh well..if I looked behind myself all the time I'd probably walk into lots of things:)
©2006-2009 ~libertine-rebel
:iconlibertine-rebel:

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I know this adoration is senseless
I know that I am rarely in your thoughts
I know that I'm living for you

but you're living in hope..

hope of something or rather someone more extrordinary
hope of a person who fulfills all your dreams
hope of a feeling you've never truly experienced before

a feeling that I have every single second we spend time together..

a feeling of inexplicable love
a feeling of happiness which I can't contain
a feeling of comfort and warmth that I get everytime I look in your eyes


I know one day I'll look at those eyes and tears will form in my own
I hope that perhaps I will learn from these repetitive mistakes
a feeling of self contentment of standing alone is what I'm striving for

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:iconundressed917:
o wow...you have expressed in this exactly what I have been feeling for the longest time...it makes me kinda want to cry because it makes me think of so much that has gone on...mistakes and everything like that....props...lots of props to you...definitly must become a fave

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you told me you wanted me to go with you...i still would go anywhere you wanted </3
:iconlibertine-rebel:
oh dont cry!please don't.You shouldnt be sad..I can probably guess what situation you were in then and why would you cry...it obviously isn't your fault there are some awful jerks out there who don't deserve you're love and affection.
Just be soo thankful you're not wasting your time today on them because they've done absolutely zilch to commend it.
You're capable of love..be proud:)

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And it's you when I look in the mirror
And it's you when I don't pick up the phone
:iconjkam101:
very good, great imagry
had that feeling once before...

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I'm built to ruin your day...
:iconcherished-teddy-bear:
It would seem that you you and I may actually be experiencing a situation that is either the same or very similar. :) I was reading through that poem and all I could think about, with every line and stanza that you wrote, was about my very own situation. The deep feeling of regret, love and confusion, mixed in with the emotions of happiness, sadness, critical sense of self-questioning.

I came on to your page view because I noticed that you had in fact added one of my poems as a favourite, and what I have found was a mirroring poem that seemed like it was written about my own situation, only to realise that it was about someone else's situation that just happened to be very similar to my own. I am amazed and have complete admiration in the poet that you are!

I love the way in which you have carefully constructed/structured it and the way that you bring out so much emotion and somehow manage to transfer those same emotions onto the reader. That's not just talent, because talent just couldn't do such a thing. What you have is a natural gift for writing and I must say, I feel truly honoured to get the chance to read such a magnificent poem such as this one.

Thank you for sharing your natural gift with us fellow deviants, in a way that I have come across very few times. :D
:iconlibertine-rebel:
that is the nicest thing anyone's ever said to me in 3 months..honestly..by far
thank you so much..although it horrifies me that the feeling i'm experiencing is so common, its nice to know I'm not alone.
Sometimes I wish I had no inspiration for these kinda poems..that I had absolutely nothing to write about because I wasnt experiencing these feelings
but I suppose I have to believe in Karma
Again thank you and i look forward to reading more of ur work:D

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And it's you when I look in the mirror
And it's you when I don't pick up the phone
:iconcherished-teddy-bear:
No worries :). That was the best poem I have read in like 3 months lol, I needed to write something nice and good about a poem, well at least something a bit different than what I usually write, and your poem gave me the perfect opportunity to do so. So thank you for writing one that warranted a comment such as mine lol.

You know, I sometimes feel the same way. I sometimes wish that everything would just go in my favour for once so that I can express emotion in other ways. Instead, I'm left silently in pain and yearning for something that I know that I can't have, and because of its complexity, I can't tell anyone in a conversation manner, so I'm left expressing my emotions and how I feel through poetry because it's really the only other option. Believe me, I know just how much that sucks lol.

Also, I'm looking forward to reading and viewing some more of your works. Please don't be offended if it takes me a while to view a deviation, I'm just a really busy person leading a really busy life at the moment. :)

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